For your first visual novel/indie game it was good. It's short but able to convey such an adorable and deep talk that's a common thing experienced by couples. Looking forward for more of your good work.
For improvement, perhaps you should change the text color for the boyfriend (?), sometimes the falling leafs cause the text to be a little bit hard to read because of the same color. Or perhaps add an outline to the text or make it bigger. Other than that, everything is good.
Thank you so much for playing! The critique is very useful, I appreciate it a lot. And the gameplay was so good! I encourage you to try different options to get to the true ending, which goes in deep into what happened with her mom and dad.
Ps: thanks to you, i realized how many typos the game has, hehehe. I’ll fix them and release them with the spanish translation.
True ending does gives you the truth of what happen, but I rather stick with Good Ending.
Bad Ending makes me do not want to associate with the boyfriend, and want to just kick his butt.
Addition to the game good point, the girlfriend character is very expressive and that's really good. Most new visual novel lacks the ability to properly utilize their character model to convey their character feelings, but you manage to do it.
