its a good visual novel, but it has some small mistakes in the wording but one BIG ERROR that broke the reading flow of it and that's when they go on holiday Bella states there is a that's we are missing a bed that there is only 2 rooms with a DOUBLE bed times 2 and a single, a double bed sleeps 2 so 2 double beds equals 4 sleeping and a single bed equals 1, so 4 + 1 = 5, now if it was a DOUBLE and 2 singles that would sleep 4 if you need my help as a English reader i would be glad to re-read and make notes on that need to be changed so the whole book flows and that your not having to stop and correct a sentence in your mind so that it reads perfectly.
your Mr GaTeZ