How has no one commented on this yet?
The game feels quite "polished" with all the menues, smooth transitions and saving/loading, although I guess RenPy have a lot of these things premade.
I am also surprised to the amount of text/story in the game, and then I probably didn't see everything (I got true ending).
Artwise, I think backgrounds are pixelated too much, level of pixelation of the main character is ideal. I guess the difference is because these were made by two different people. Also Alex looks cute, but the computer club background looks too contrasty/purple, not pleasing for eyes.
Story-wise, I think it feels very made-up and thus unrelatable:
- Why does 12-year old need to be taught how to use the computer?
- How they don't have a computer already?
- Ok, let's say they are super poor and can't afford a computer. Why then do they go to the computer club? - it costs money and they'll get a free computer from parents soon anyway.
- They also both speak of internet as of a dangerous place, which is super paranoid
With all the criticism, though, very good overall for a jam game:)