Wow. This is a powerful poem, and the visual interpretation of it is very strong. That first screen especially- it immediately let me know what I was getting into, and is just wonderful visually. Going through this was like following a trail, step by step, to the end. The story is written very well, and unfolds slowly, almost beautifully. (Though I need to ask, was this really deicide? Or is the "goddess" the main character's girlfriend, or something?).
I especially like how each step goes back to the screen with "words written down", with new text. Lets me know I'm on the right track; it's kinda like letting me see my progress as the story unfolds. This game is just great. Wow.
(by the way, I'm in this Twiny Jam, too! My game is HCF. Check it out?)