What an interesting game! Really like your story and concept ideas; I'd love to see them fleshed out even more. The grammar mistakes (no capitalized letters of 1st words) make it dim a bit to me, though, but it's still quite good. I'd love to hear some voice-acting in this game; I think it would really spice this up.
The way the game is looped is effective as well. I wonder if there's a final ending, though . . .
Overall, an experience worth taking! Love it! (btw, I'm in this jam as well! :D My game is HCF)