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the concept is intriguing and the message it sends is very nice.

 videogame-wise, there's too much to read before the game even starts, and the pickups are moving on screen way too random too fast. this makes players frustrated.

Overall, nice game i't just needs some slight touches :)

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Thank you for your honest feedback. I agree that I should have made a tutorial segment instead of so much tutorial text. As for the randomness, I think it kinda backfired on me :D. I will keep it in mind. Thanks.