I've read your game description and don't worry!, everyone starts somewhere and it's necessary to make games (good or bad ones) to improve. Having said this, this is far from bad considering its your first game and you had one week. One thing that I missed is the lack of controls or introduction, if you have no time to implement them inside the game, write them later in your page description, this way more players will enjoy it and discover mechanics they didn't know, without frustrating them not knowing what to do. Great job and keep it up!