A lot of things to say here !
Physics are a bit weird, sometimes movement would not respond, and jump is kinda weird too. Music is great for something made from scratch. 2D assets are OK.
There is toooo much to read ! If you want your player to feel invested in the game, try to make things pop out, interacting with people, or make levels to make them understand how to play ! A bit too much text.
Overall, still a game that was worked on, and that fits the theme. You know have to polish the details !!