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Nice, but could have benefited from a wide shot of all three characters.  All of the other shots were too tight, lacking a comprehensive shot.  


Likewise, instead of a 5-grid diagram for scrolling through the shots, it would have made more sense to see a row of five dots that I would slide through in order/linearly.  

When the music plays, it's a sudden audio spike.  

Thanks for the feedback! The camera mechanics are an evolving work in progress :)