p27 Which Character suffers and dies because your actions? should be Which Character suffers and dies because of your actions?
YES! COINS FLOW THROUGH MY FINGERS FOR THIS!
p29 You are exposed as a monster and flee to a far off land should technically be flee to a far-off land
YOU ARE CORRECT BUT THE PRIZE FOR THIS WAS ALREADY TAKEN!
p43 "That Resource once belonged to a...
YOU ARE RIGHT AND IT IS AWKWARD AND I CHANGED IT SO YOU GET A PRIZE