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p61 You confuse living mortals with the a dead Character all the time should be  You confuse living mortals with a dead Character all the time

LOOK ALL!  LOOK!  TSETSOVA DOES NOT MUCK AROUND IN THE APPENDICES FINDING SMALL ERRORS!  NO!  TSETSOVA ROARS INTO THE MAIN SECTION AND SHAMES ME BY POINTING OUT BLATANT IDIOCY!  A PRIZE FOR TSETOVA!  

p67 Modify an old Memory to include an anachronistic use of this sort contemporary communication technology should be Modify an old Memory to include an anachronistic use of this sort of contemporary communication technology

NOT CONTENT WITH VICTORY THE TSETSOVA CLAIMS ANOTHER PRIZE

p82 The tiny dramas played out by these creatures comes to fascinate you should be The tiny dramas played out by these creatures come to fascinate you ( because come should be conjugated to match the word 'dramas' )

p82 Create two mortal Characters with a divergent interests in this mysterious affliction should be Create two mortal Characters with divergent interests in this mysterious affliction.

TWO MORE VICTORIES FOR THE INSATIABLE TSETSOVA.