p83 it's own microcosm proof against the rule of authority should be its own microcosm proof against the rule of authority.
p86 You discover a technological principle or invention far before it's time should be
You discover a technological principle or invention far before its time.
Appendix IV - Because TYOV is a solo game it’s making was a self-contained process,
should be Because TYOV is a solo game its making was a self-contained process,
also - piece that becomes a record of it’s own making should be piece that becomes a record of its own making
also - if it’s best form happens to be a book should be its best form happens to be a book