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Pros and cons are down below) Check out my vid here pls:

Advantages:

1. I love the ambiance! It reminded me of Alien Isolation, actually. It would be cool if the monster would appear more frequently (as an actual enemy or as a jumpscare).

2. The game has successfully managed to build a sense of tension. I was waiting for something the whole game. Nice design of sound effects at the station!

Disadvantages:

1. It would be awesome to add some more background music. You can add something very imperceptible like Amnesia did. More music would be nice because it felt like walking around in a complete silence which was a bit weird. Also, it would be awesome to make the enemy sound really scary while following you!

2. Huge notes are weird. I mean, I get it, they attract attention, but still if they would have a little glow or something, it would be less strange. People know that they are playing a game so glow mechanic or something like that is expected. But when you try to make it more natural and add an enormous papers on walls - that feels off.

Overall:

I liked the game! Still, it felt a bit raw sometimes. There were moments when I really liked the sound design and then moments when it felt that sounds were missing. I think the game can be polished a bit more. It's 4/5 for me but the game has lots of potential to become a 5 star experience.

Hope my feedback was useful!

(+1)

Thanks you very much for your feedback, really appreciate the detailed write up. We could add a mechanic that draws a white outline on the notes whenever you're pointed at it next time, and add more audio feedback in future games.

That would be awesome! Can't wait for your future projects)