I loved the message for Torahiko's not having a route on the beach right now, it's cute nonetheless.
I will say this: I love the fact that you guys are writting him pretty damn good making him way more enjoyable and less of a goofball like he was in the original all the time since he didn't had a route.
You know a design of a character is good when you start thinking of that character on the new design instead of the old, which is amazing actually. I really love what you guys did with his design, and Shun also have a better personality in this version.
I think of all the cast the only main character that didn't work well for me is Kouya, I dunno if it's final design but as long as his story is good I won't mind. :) Keep up with the good work, I know more than anyone how hard it is to write those routes. <o