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Yeah there isn't a lot here to critque.  I enjoyed the theme and artstyle and I think if you had enough time to implement the gameplay you could make something very fun and unique. 

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I am planning to let this be my first project outside of college when I am finish in the fall. I am happy to see the positive feed back from everyone.