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I work with AI all day every day. Most of the text seems very strongly AI, most of the UI looks AI - it has the standard problems that LLMs like Claude have whenever they try to design game UI or game copy (too complex, doesn't make sense to a human, words that are mismatched grammar, meanigns that are jumbled up, etc). If you say you wrote it, OK fine - but it currently looks very strongly like you did not. I would suggest rewriting your copy to be more natural. It's difficult to read, in exactly the way that long AI-written text is difficult to read.

Similarly ... The tutorial is not something I can believe was written by a human, it's so incredibly complex and over-fixated on details that only an AI would focus on.

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Thank you for the feedback!
Hope you enjoy playing the game and seeing all the love, sweat and tears I've put into it!

Latest patch has just dropped and You will see part of what I am doing is a mass clean up of in-game text.

See you in the Halls!