Lovely, it just needs some music :) There is a glitch where pressing the left arrow key neither advances the poem but also makes the avatar jump from one side of the screen to the opposite side on each press. But seemed to sort itself out after I just pressed the other arrow keys a few times.
Thanks for playing and taking the time to leave a comment!
I actually composed a very tiny piece of music in Bitsy but the internal music engine doesn't work properly (the music resets/restarts every time you move to a new room and I don't know if there's a way around it) and I didn't have time to get the external audio hack working so no sound. However, since there's no sound on the Moon I thought that was somewhat apt and also a contrast to what one would experience back home.
The movement is not a glitch, exactly, it's how the room transitions are set up because you're moving back and forth between two different sections of the lunar surface but I think I used the wrong entrance/exit setting on them, although I'm not sure the other viable option would have made a difference. I did think of another way to try to do it late in the jam but I would have needed to add a couple more horizontal lines of art to the surface of the Moon in its rooms and redo all the entrance/exits. which is extremely time consuming, and I was out of time by that point.