Hi !
I love the narrative and the atmosphere you managed to create despite simple/learner visual arts, and how you cleverly re-used the character's assets to create multiple characters.
I liked having to solve the puzzles and the choices we can make in the dialogues to find the right path to make progress too. The story is interesting and makes me want to know more o_o
Your games hower feels a bit unpolished, but I think it's mainly due to the fact you are learning art. I can't give you 5/5 because it would be unfair to other, more experienced artists but I think you're on the right path ! I myself don't dare yet to create my own art for games. Apart from that everything else looks pretty solid to me !