It was a bit hard to distinguish between speakers. The card mechanic was obscure but I found it very interesting. I know that there were solutions and that I could retry and figure out things in a better way. The connection between the cards and the choices themselves could have been more clear – like the order often confused me, and there were combinations that I really thought made sense but wouldn't do anything. Also, does that say SKEP??? I know that's lots of suggestions but only because there is something here!
Thank you bushn! It was my first time writing in first person (usually do second person). So good feedback on "who is speaking". I agree the comnection between cards, slots, and story got a bit lost. When I realized it was too little time to revamp it 😅 . I got SKEP from greek Skepsis, meaning thought. I hope it doesnt mean anything else offensive or weird I'm not aware of?? Appreciate all your suggestions, thanks again!