nice job. This is another one that I felt like I was playing and wondering what was coming next as I was reading it.
I enjoyed the pacing of it with a substantial village scene and character questions in the beginning. Then the travel section. And then the final encounter.
What I really liked also was that after the first page I felt like I could come up with something even if I didn’t have the reverse side.
With the Holme character I really enjoyed that if the party seems to violent they won’t bother letting them know about the side effects of eating both roses. So good doubling down on his character
Awesome stuff with Ebba too. Really fun to have her reanimate if they harm the worm. And the way you painted her story in general was great.
good stuff.