The game was cute; it made me nostalgic for visiting the library and trying to speedread books before the due date. I missed the point of checking out a heap of books at once when you only had 5 foci at a time and going to the library frequently had no downside. Maybe leveling it up was overlooked? Otherwise I'd suggest having a small transportation fee to get there or maybe someone else driving you there only once a week so you'd want to get extra books despite the focus limit. Great game!
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Thanks for playing, and for the great feedback! I like those ideas, especially limiting how often/when you get to go to the library. Would want to think about how it fits in with a return policy (maybe the library is only open certain days for checking out), worth exploring for sure.
Was also thinking about increasing the amount of available focus as you level up, or introducing some kind of temporary bonus focus when you complete a book to further incentivize having lots of them at a time.
Thanks again :)