I really like this one, especially the colour compositions and how well the limited palette works across the whole adventure. The overall theming and presentation feel really cohesive, and it’s very easy to understand what’s happening and where the adventure is taking you.
I also really like the Mirror Game as a central mechanic. It gives the Lindworm encounter something much more interesting than simply fighting a big monster, while tying nicely into the story and the character’s history.
Overall, it feels like a really solid and easy-to-run adventure. My only real suggestion would be to make some of the key gameplay information a little easier to find at a glance, but beyond that, I think this works really well both as an adventure and as a trifold.