Love the theming, narrative, and setting of the adventure. It’s easy to understand what’s happening and what the adventure is trying to convey. My only concern is the readability of the text and some of the colour choices. I feel a more refined colour palette, alongside more considered font choices and some additional breathing room within the text boxes, would improve the overall presentation. The text could also be made slightly smaller while remaining perfectly readable. Together, I think these changes would give the design more polish and elevate it overall.
Thanks CSP. When I print the trifold the colours are more muted than the digital ones are. So a little less saturation should resolve that - thanks.
And fonts, again on one of my screens they are tricky but when printed I - with older eyes - find them readable. Is it the “old wood” font I’m using in the text for names and such that’s of lost concern? Cheers
The font is reabable to me fine when sized correctly, I would say especially on the text that is bound by the box for the Salt Rumours and Rules, needs some padding either side, some more spacing, so with that in mind all the text needs to be shrunk by at least 0.5 or 1 pt and then given more padding between lines, i would also lose the blue all together, does't fit the colour palette and the aesthetic in my eyes.