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thanks this is helpful. Design isn’t something I’m trained in so have been trying to wrangle things. Definitely will polish this up based on yours and other people’s feedback. 
I felt that the foghouse will be central to the conflict and wanted a design that allows for Guides of add their own touches. I am tempted to add both a salt rules one page as you and others have suggested. I couldn’t fit in all the detail from my research and for the game I wanted. I am also tempted to do the same for the foghouse. 
I’m now on the fence thinking I should fix the trifold layout and colours but redo the whole thing as a short booklet to give me the space I really wanted 

Presentation is excellent. Themes are well done.  Is well laid out and is clear how to use it. It does feel very dangerous, indeed likely lethal for players.  

so salt was the original plan prior to the theme being announced and so I fit in the fire theme around it.  I feel that fatherfog at the 0E unfinished design is too hopeless and hasn’t explored supernatural  beliefs and superstitions. I tried to cram as much as a little trifold can fit without going unreadably small on the font - I test printed it a few times to make sure I could easily see what’s what at a table behind aGM screen. That was a reason as well for the blue…it’s easy to see but yes thematically feels out of place. I err on usability over pretty because I have been there plenty of times Gaming trying to find that name or other key thing in the fly. And green for colour blind people is to easily confused for red. But yes it and some layout work is needed. A limitation is working in Apple Pages.  Thanks for the feedback. I am now tempest to repeat and expand it in the larger adventure I have drafted that is more in line with Into the Fog. 

Thanks CSP. When I print the trifold the colours are more muted than the digital ones are. So a little less saturation should resolve that - thanks.

And fonts, again on one of my screens they are tricky but when printed I - with older eyes - find them readable. Is it the “old wood” font I’m using in the text for names and such that’s of lost concern? Cheers