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The art in this is beautiful and the layout is generally very good, one minor point is I'd put the explanation of what the wolf-knight is above the random table, so we have that context when reading the table. Both the Backstory and the About this Adventure sections could probably be cut down a bit, and in general some of the writing is a bit wordier than necessary.

I agree with the commentator below that this really needs some way of dealing with the Unspeakable One and lifting the curse! There are hints - the tree, the book, the crystals all seem like they might reduce its power if destroyed - but nothing concrete is stated.

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Hi, thanks for your comment. Love the feedback, yes due to space constraint, we can't elaborate more about it. For now it comes back to GM interpretation, but we are planning an extended edition that will consist the second floor. Also that is a wonderful idea that if the book, tree, and crystal destroyed, it will reduce the power of the curse. Thanks for the review and feedback.