Thanks for the feedback! This was my first entry or published adventure ever. I learned a lot. My ambitions were a little too big for the page size requirements. I wanted to have pre-gens as part of the scenario because it made sense with hidden agendas. But to your point I probably could have just had their agendas and not included stats.
I drew the map. I've always liked those exploded axonometric maps in adventures and I thought worked with this.
I'm looking forward to running it. At my next con. Unfortunately I had all me regilar gamer friends fproof read it...haha.