Well done, this was a compelling story and I enjoyed working through it. I did feel the ending was quite abrupt and took me by surprise. It would have also been easier to read if there were a couple of spaces between the text and the edge of the screen.
All in all this was an interesting story with a deep subject and you did it well.
I'm glad my writing was able to create such an experience! I can see the bit about the ending, but I'm not sure I would change it unless something big came to me. The console scales to any resolution, meaning making the spaces would be essentially impossible, but if I were to make a GUI and such for it I would definitely make sure to neaten things up! Thank you for the feedback!
