Thanks. Clearly I needed to not incorporate the background. I probably tried to include too much, but I wanted a horror adventure with pre-gens that created friction between the players. When I received the title I didn't want to just do some obvious sci-fi plunge, I wanted to invert the expectation. The theme might be a little thin on the plot. It's my first published adventure. I learned a lot. Also...of the text based adventures I think I enjoyed Enchanter the best...hahaha