Such a nice header and no picture on the submission-page :(
Hard to read, especially towards the end. Which is a shame, because there is a lot going on. A lot of suspense and investigation.
I get the sense of horror due to the mist. Also the rooms which don’t seem to mean anything - if you don’t know the objectives of the crew members. This could be quite a tug of war with the right player group.
The title was only a loose inspiration, if that (ZORK taught me about the sign of Jupiter many years ago).