This was great! I love the cover and all the art, and the theme/setting are really unique. It’s a fun dungeon, a cool map to explore (though would love to see more about the other locations if you’d had more space), and “Yager-yugh” is incredibly Appendix N. My only real suggestions would be to see if you could export a higher-res version of the dungeon map (it’s a little blurry) and I worry that if you ever printed this some of the page heading text would get cut off. But all in all, great work!
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Thank you for taking the time to read it, and for the feedback! Yes I agree the maps look a bit blurry, especially when zoomed in. It's an effect I'm afraid is made worse by my choice to use a semi-transparent digital pen. I've been blown away by the other submissions, and have been learning so much since the ratings opened 🤯