Reading this all over again and omg im in love - the character relationships (familial, friendly, blossoming on romance) not just with mc but the people around them is so GOOD
I think the exploritive options for how they feel and contexualize trauma, love, sadness, etc. As a child can be so heartwrenching but also puts into perspective how small and sheltered they can be in their perspective (both being a child and being hidden away)
Idk where to put this but Sage is so intriguing as a RO and who is currently my favorite- I love how possesive they can be (and pointedly recognizing it within himself) i like how to mc sage "domain" is both a safe space but not an actual place to belong (mc cant stay they forever - nor should they! But wouldn't it be nice just being so safe and cared for unconditionally...)
There's more I could say but ill end my ramble there ty for the amazing update!