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I played this almost a month ago and I'm just now getting around to writing a review for it because I wasn't even sure how to write about this in a way that would do it justice. It's been a while since I've played a game that feels so warm and comfy and intimate regardless of how things end.

The presentation is definitely unique - at first I wasn't sure how to feel about the exclusive use of NVL mode taking up half the screen, but as it went on I started to get more used to it. Ultimately I think it worked really well, and made it feel more like a book than a VN in some ways, which I know sounds a little silly. It's hard to describe, but for example I looked through the game's backgrounds after I finished and was surprised with how relatively few there were - it felt like there were way more than only 3 for the shopping center part, for example, just due to how well it was all described.

That said, I absolutely loved both the backgrounds and the character art. The girl's sprites are very expressive (the flustered one is extremely cute in particular) and having them be mirrored for each girl worked well on multiple levels. I still can't get over how much I love the background photos too - what kind of camera did you use for them? Again I really loved the nighttime / shopping center ones in particular, but they're all great, from use of color to composition. The use of the NIN tracks fit the game super well, and similarly I have to imagine that the art for Ghosts I - IV might have been an inspiration for the film grain covered photos used here. 

The whole drunken interactions scene was especially cute, with all of its silly misunderstandings. The majority of the game just felt so cute and cozy and -

I don't want to spoil anything from the ending sequence, but I will say that it is deeply impressive how you managed to make that sort of warmth continue on through an otherwise incredibly uncomfortable series of events. Semi-related, I know you only used songs from Ghosts in particular, but Right Where It Belongs has become a sort of unofficial credits song to this for me, it just felt way too fitting not to listen to it after finishing this. Both that song and this game give me the same sort of feeling I guess? - it's hard to put it other than bleak and depressing but still ultimately hopeful in spite of that?

I think I've rambled enough at this point but what I'm trying to say is I really really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing and I hope you make more games in the future!

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This was really sweet,,, thank you,, it made me happy reading this,,

When I was porting my script over to renpy,, I knew I wanted to use NVL mode. I liked how Nadia Nova used it in snowcorpse necromancy,, it being my first time using renpy I had some trouble getting it to fit the screen and look good with the text. Eventually I just got it to a point I was happy with and left it,, it definitely sat on my mind though that it covered a decent portion of the photos I took. It's interesting to me (in a good way) that you thought it made it feel more like a book,,, most of my experience writing has been short stories,, which I suppose translated into this work more than I thought it did.

The camera I used for the background photos was a fujica st605n!!,, its a fairly old film camera,, and I used portra 400/800 film for the backgrounds,, the film grain is all real :>>,, taking the night photos was difficult because of this,, had to use a tripod and do long exposures because there isn't much light, is why the photo of the street is a little blurry, I think I bumped it while taking the photo,,,

When I was looking for music,, nothing quite matched the vibe I was going for as well as the Ghosts tracks did,,, them being creative-commons was kind of perfect,, so I ended up using a lot of their songs,,,, Right Where it Belongs was really beautiful,,, I think it would have been really fitting for a credits scene,,, 

Thank you for playing my vn,,, it means alot that you took the time to type this out!! am currently working on another vn which should be out some time in october hopefully,,, ^^

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Thanks for responding! Honestly the NVL text covering half of the screen wasn't that big of a deal - if you middle click with a mouse it temporarily hides any text on the screen so you can see the background. I don't know if that's super well known or not but makes it easier to appreciate all of the photos. Speaking of, you can absolutely tell that you used an actual film camera for this - there really is just no way of getting that same look digitally. I know film is a lot more effort than digital, but I think it was totally worth it in this case. Even if the street photo is blurry I wouldn't say that takes anything away from it, either.

If there's anywhere you've posted some of your short stories publicly I'd be very interested in reading them, but completely understandable if not. In any case I'm glad to hear that you're working on another VN and I will definitely be looking forward to it!

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Of course! I post all my short stories on reddit,,, I've mostly written greentexts on a smut subreddit,, if that's something you'd be interested in,,, here are two of my favorites I've written ^^

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