This is very imaginative, and I love the presentation—with the little illustrations and the map drawn directly on the paper. You make great, personalized use of the different elements of Cairn for exploration. I also really like that you include the works that inspired you; it’s very helpful for capturing the right tone. If I had to nitpick, the light gray text on the left side of the center pages is a bit too light, but that’s a minor detail. The truth is, I absolutely loved it.
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Hey that's so kind thanks! My last module using Cairn I felt wasn't using the system to its full potential so I tried to lean into those signs and environment tables here.
That's a good point on the grey text and I'll add it to my list of post jam tweaks that I'd like to go and do once the voting period is over. Thanks again and good luck in the jam yourself!