I think you did a really good job with the named characters especially with such limited space! Great sense of their motivations. I also love the imagery and vibes you describe, very cool direction for the theme (and the idea of a cold forge is sick). The isometric map is cool, though I would echo what others have said vis-a-vis numbers. The bold text for important bits that are detailed in bullet points is kind of genius for the limitations. And of course I have to say the art is amazing. Nice work!!