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- Really dig the cover/graphic design! 

- Very evocative writing throughout (the intro really sets the mood). The word play of Draw Blood/Draw Steel is fun. 

- Draw Steel is a total blindspot for me, so can't comment on the mechanics of it, but it all seems well thought out!

- Really great creature descriptions. 

- I definitely think this adventure would work well with an expanded page count if you ever decide to do that. 

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a detailed comment! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts! I definitely plan to expand this to a definitive version when the jam judging is over. I may also be making a 5e version which a lot more people would be able to use.