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I played your game. Here is the recording: 

Something vent wrong with the voice recording, your game sound was recorded so load that it's kind of impossible the hear my voice in the video. Sorry about that. I haven't played a loot of text adventure games but I liked yours. It seemed really fleshed out, like you world is complete. I didn't like the music, just very load and repetitive, hard to concentrate on reading with it in the background. I also felt i didn't have enough infromation to take meaning full choices. Like I had no idea what the diffrence between the classes was when I had to pick one. Combat was also a bit dragged out, lots of hitting 1 on the keyboard an doing a little bitt of damage without any fear of death because I was much stronger that the enemies and I could always drink some potions if my hp gets low. Othervise, I think the game feelt pretty polished and nice to play, I could tell you've put a loot of hours into making it. God look going forward. 

I’ll definitely work on that and thanks for the advice, I’m having trouble with recording right, so give me till Monday to send the video over. Sorry for the inconvenience 

That's fine, no hurry

Okay so I recorded the game, overall it's really good and I like it. I think it can go further with more time beyond castles into like empires and stuff kinda like factorio if you've played that game. The upgrades do get a little costly especially with the stone I had trouble getting enough with the first stages and stuff. Also a little tutorial on your end goal would be nice just in case people don't read descriptions along with a menu screen. Other than that good game overall and I have given you a rating to push your game out there hopefully. I had troubles on my end via recording as I'm on a chromebook so I wasn't able to get the audio recorded. 

https://vimeo.com/1217403302?share=copy&fl=sv&fe=ci