Others have said it, visuals are very strong, nailed the tone and theme and came up with a fun adventure. There's some typos, but on this timeline, whose doesn't? The cover image is good, and having it double as the map is very clever, but it takes away from the strength of the image (for me). Maybe there's a more subtle way to accomplish the same thing but I'm not going to yuck your yum. You clearly know what you're doing.
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Hi! I'm surprised no one has mentioned the typos yet, because my English isn't the best, and I was sure there must be some mistakes I couldn't spot. I think you're right about the map, I was really happy with the cover until I had to add the numbers and the connections between rooms. Next year (if the jam takes place), I'll try something different if I can.
Thanks so much for the review!