This is awesome, and it’s really cool to see an entry set in the real world (or close enough to it). The broad scope of the adventure really helps nail the epic tone, and in general it just seems really fun to play through.
I particularly liked the descriptions of the gods; in only a little space you got across everything a GM would need to roleplay them, and the quotes in particular were helpful.
If I had one suggestion it’d be to increase the font size so it’s easier to read, but I can see why you needed the extra space for how much you squeezed in.