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I'm happy you're enjoying the project!!

Do you have any specific complaints about the english script? As the translator for this project, that'd be invaluable (and rare) feedback :)


I'd love to hear your thoughts. You can also dm me through twitter or dc if that's better for you (if you're in the project's dc server). Cheers.

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It's just the English is still quite rough around the edges, misspelling, grammar error, felt rushed and rigid; making  the character personality in the narration not popping out and a little bit awkward to read. So yeah, it's just need a bit of cleaning and polishing. I really thank you that you're willing to listen, even asking me the details... I'm just sorry if my comment sound a bit harsh.

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If you ever find egregious typos or grammar mistakes, don't hesitate to point them out if you can on our discord!

Thank you for your comments.