awesome minimalist presentation in the ui and art. i really like what this game did with the classic renpy menus, putting all of the options and saves into one tiny window. really adds to the claustrophobic and lonely feeling overall.
the main story is solidly written. i noticed quite a few typos, but the quality of the prose itself is strong. i got a good sense of who emerald hernandez was by the end of the story. also seeing toxic yuri from not one, but two relationships was something i didn't see coming. love the exploration of emerald's long, but failing marriage with her wife.
i think my most major critique (aside from being unable to click through the pauses) is that i wish i could've gotten to know sierra on the same level as emerald, esp since in the last third of the story, we are in her pov
otherwise, great work! excited to see what you do next