haha oh wow thank you for bringing the typos to my attention that is really embarrassing ... i extracted the dialogue and ran the full thing through spellcheck (which honestly should have done way before but we live and learn lol) so hopefully thats sorted !!!
i really appreciate hearing this (and i agree about sierra, if it wasnt for time constraints + poor planning we couldve stayed in her head a little longer ... alas) i will keep it in mind for future endeavors o7