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This one is a super peculiar entry: a sci-fi adventure screaming Star Trek out loud made using cairn as its system is something new to me. I really liked both the cover, the visual design and the illustrations you made for this module. The only cons I feel to point out is I find the font a little hard to read from a screen (I haven't tried to print it yet) as it gives me a compact wall of text impression, leading me to go back and forth to follow a sentence. It may be just me, but I think with this much and tiny text a serif font would have been more readable. 

I also wanted to let you know there is a correction needed in Page 2

Rodenberry Waves prevent almost always prevents interstallar comms.


Anyway, this is one of my favorite as for visual design and an overall strong submission, great job!

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Thank you!

RE: The needed correction

It should read "Rodenberry Waves almost always prevent interstellar comms," the implication being that the simple SOS just barely got through out of sheer chance.

The only cons I feel to point out is I find the font a little hard to read from a screen

When I release the full version of this (after my Cairn-inspired Trek-like rules are out) I'm definitely going larger on the font size, and more varied on font type. The current type is compressed 9 point futura iirc, so I'm not surprised folks are having trouble parsing it.