Overall, I like how you interpreted the title a lot and you have an eye for tone and imagery. The cover design is phenomenal, though I agree with others that "Trunkless" seems like the title. (Love the font, care to share what it is?) But it is doing a lot of the heavy lifting in terms of my score for the visuals. The interior design leaves a bit to be desired and the map is not the easiest to read. I didn't really get why or how the PCs get involved, but that could be warden/table dependent. Really a nice module.
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Thanks for taking the time to reply! I'm gushing over the tone/imagery compliment. Despite my inexperience in layout/etc, I'm just really glad the vibe of the place is being picked up by so many people!
I considered a hook table, but I didn't do myself any favors with space - the intention was that the PC's are inexplicably affected by the curse overnight, which kind of forces their hand on resolving it one way or another.