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I love the cover and the maps and the art, color scheme, etc. But (for me) the text was hard to read, had to go back several times just to figure it out. That being said (barring the typos, which I can easily forgive), it is excellent overall. You have a clear, distinct voice and vision for this project and it made me want to play a Star Tr-esque adventure, which if you knew me, would be quite the feat. Well done. 

Thanks for checking it out!

Regarding the text: What was hard to read? Was it the font? A style thing? This is going to be turned into a starter adventure for my own bespoke Trek-like system, and it would be great to have that feedback for that version.

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It was the font, for me. Just something to consider, going forward. When you have a super condensed font like that in a large wall of text, can be difficult for some. I understand well trying to get everything to fit. Just something to consider in the future. 

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Oh yeah, I'm absolutely planning on using a larger font size for non-Jam stuff. The current size was mostly a concession to this being a jam entry.
Thank you!