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This is awesome. Great visual design and layout that crams a lot of good stuff into a little package. You've got a very well-considered central conceit that you mechanics support really well. The NPCs and monsters are very well written with interesting and evocative prose.  I did find that the background image made reading a bit tough in spots, I may have upped the transparency a little to give the text slightly better contrast. 

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Sounds like the background is an issue, several have commented on that.  Makes sense.  I really appreciate the analysis of the content and I'm glad you liked it!  It's my first try at publishing a fully written adventure in any format.  I appreciate the feedback.