I think the foundation of this story is solid, history to the place and interesting encounters. One challenge I had is that the room descriptions reference other numbered areas, but the map just having the area names... it becomes a 2 step process to reference areas.
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I am really appreciating that I was able to communicate the story and history through the text, I was mostly worried about that since I have trouble with terse writing sometimes.
GREAT point about the map - I had been working off of numbered boxes while writing, and the map came together later. Huge oversight but easy fix for after the Jam!