I've been playing a number of these GMTK game jam submissions, and even though there were others that were technically more polished than this one, this has to be one of my favorites because it was so original.
I only had three issues. First, the writing quality did kind of fall off after the introduction, as was previously pointed out. Second, the help section gave a bunch of different commands for movement and using things, but I never felt like I got to use any of them. Given more time, maybe the story could have expanded and had those actions, but as it were, I felt like they just hinted at something better that I didn't actually get to play. Finally, as a minor issue, I think it would have been better to store the media files in a subfolder, as the game folder was kind of messy.
Overall though, I really liked this game. It was fun and original. Great job.