There's some good stuff here! The cover reminds me a little of Luka Rejec's stuff. The spacing of your layout is good. but I have a couple of suggestions. First, those black lines in each are write-up are way too thick and the area title is way too small. What you lack there is visual hierarchy, which means the most visible element is the most important, working down to the least visible being least important element. The most important info on your pages should be the area locations, but the most visible element is the black lines. I hope that makes sense.