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Started reading from this update, it's so well built up :D


Wanted to point out a typo : At 7 years old, when we reach Tintal and one of the kids shoves us, after picking up "shove him back", it says : "With all your force, you shove into him, making him loose his balance. He glares at you, but doesn't do anything." -- the correct wording is LOSE his balance (loose is for something that isn't tight).


Idem after Mordred possibly meets Arthur the first time. I decided to be overwhelmed and run away, then when meeting our draconic friend, we think : "You feel the name they're about to say before the syllabls can even form shape in your mind, so you cut them off quickly". -- it's "syllables"


There are a handful other typos and one coding error in Ch.5 (dragon_name's) I have seen so far, not sure what's the best place to point those out but just to say ^^


I'll keep on reading the rest ;) thanks for creating this !

Thank you!! It should all be fixed now, and if you find any more erros you can report them here on itch - or send an ask on tumblr, whichever works best for you.