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Thanks for the news ! :)

Not sure where to post for typos or so, but while reading CH3 on randomized genders (M Ash) I got a feminine pronoun even though it went back to the usual masculine further down the dialogue.

"You will start by asking about other Oracles when Ashmedai arrives. However, she might know nothing at all, and you would need to bring up this topic before Vezriel or Osaron. And then… then…(...)

You look at the clock on the wall. When will Ashmedai come? You sent him a message at least an hour ago."

Could be a fix for next update :D XOXO have a great evening

Started reading from this update, it's so well built up :D

Wanted to point out a typo : At 7 years old, when we reach Tintal and one of the kids shoves us, after picking up "shove him back", it says : "With all your force, you shove into him, making him loose his balance. He glares at you, but doesn't do anything." -- the correct wording is LOSE his balance (loose is for something that isn't tight).

Idem after Mordred possibly meets Arthur the first time. I decided to be overwhelmed and run away, then when meeting our draconic friend, we think : "You feel the name they're about to say before the syllabls can even form shape in your mind, so you cut them off quickly". -- it's "syllables"

There are a handful other typos and one coding error in Ch.5 (dragon_name's) I have seen so far, not sure what's the best place to point those out but just to say ^^

I'll keep on reading the rest ;) thanks for creating this !

Re ! Thanks mate, I'll check on that tomorrow then :D Absolutely deserving.

Also great to read about the coming plan then ! Can't wait to see what new pearl you show us in your coming pack ^^

Cheers :3

Ciao ! Amazing work and music, having all this catalogue and also free for commercial use is honestly mind blowing :D

• I am currently on an interactive fiction project where I plan on using some of your songs (I will credit you and ping the project on the comments again once I officially launch the prologue on itch ^^).

• I have already bought the bundle, but I'd be curious how we can participate some more (patreon, kofi, rebuying again on itch ??) because I do want to donate some more on my original purchase. Excuse me if you already explained somewhere how to, I do not see any information of the sort ;)

• Also, would you be possibly making a new pack in the future based on antic tonalities ? I'm imagining some wind and string instruments all mediterranian/west asia style. This question out of pure curiosity ^^ 

Tschüss !

Ooooh I did not consider that aspect of things !

Learned something new, thanks :D

And yaaaaaaay, different plotlines :3 I also thought similarly on GS (what if this route had the aspects of Y instead), but our own brain power can imagine that too in any case, heh.

Both techniques are worth their own benefits, indeed.

In any case, I do hope you take a well deserved vacation (if having a break before picking up a new project (even as it is already half written, innit ?) is even on the menu buahahahahah). Can't wait to read updates !

GratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratzGratz *insert confetti* ! That is one hell of a milestone :D I cannot wait to read it tomorrow, on my free time ! And I totally understand not redoing overlapping RO storylines. From a reader's POV, it personally makes me want to skip most dialogue (but then I'd miss the little changes) if most of the storyline is "doubled"... and on the writer's POV, I can understand how it gets boring (for me at least) and tiring. So I'm totally with you on that regard :3 Can't wait to check on your new coming project ! And hope we get to read you from time to time (even if it isn't about the project's update) ^^ Cheers !

Thank you for the Patreon ! Could not wait to add you :) I am really glad, as I prefer keeping tabs on subs in a single app (unless content creators start saying that Patreon steals a fee from the subs, then I would seek an alternative like Ko-Fi or else). Cheers ! :D

Totally understandable !

As you say, the quality will rule over quantity ;) Thank you so much for your reply !

Can't wait for the coming book then ! :3 Cheers !

Ciao !

Came from the first game on Steam, really happy to see the ETR is for June 2026 !

I wanted to leave a big up ++ for the art of the characters, they look super nice ! The artist did an excellent job.

Is the second volume longer than the first one ? Hopefully so. At some moments in the first book, I wished there was some more content to read through (world building/descriptive e.g.), even though is was overall satisfactory :)

And if I may ask, is this supposed to be the final part of the project ? Or would there possibly be a follow-up (same universe, same chars // same universe, different chars) ? This is out of curiosity !

Thanks again for sharing your stories :^D

Hello !

Found a typo on v. 9.1 itchio, Damon's route, Knife and CC training, picking the 3rd dialogue option (aka, "I can do this !"). It's "surprised" and not "surpised" in :

"I SURPISED myself by breezing through the simulation, and I could tell that Aya was just as stunned".

Tried adding the picture of the dialogue, but itchio gives me "error - missing token". Oh well.

Cheers,

Okidok ! Understood :)

Thanks a lot ! Aaaaaaand can't wait :D

Hi there ! :)

I discovered your project not long ago, and I'm already a sucker for Wolf's snarky grin, buahahahahaha. As many have said, the characters you create have such weight that it is absolutely fantastic to read more about the world you are creating.

If I may ask (for clarification), is the "demo" updated with the content you add bit by bit ? Or do you plan to release it per episodes ? Or is the actual extra content only on Patreon ? Asking because the demo I played had some unfinished backgrounds, and by checking your Patreon it seems you already worked on them.

I tried finding the information on that, but maybe I keep looking for it right next to where the actual answer is.

Thank you a lot (also for making an Orc loving game, I am so damn happy it exists because Azram is just that gorgeous)!

:D Cheers !

You can always post your next draft *later* and just say that we (readers) skipped time and got pushed forward in the future, kek.

Thanks for the log ! Glad that things are slowly reaching completion :3 Hope you do take some breaks and that it isn't too taxing, after making such a hottie of a brother (I wanna braid that hair so bad, muahahahaha).

Cheers,

Started playing, and I like it SOOOO MUCH. Text options are fun, you grow to like every character and the interactions are so dynamic...

I like playing chat sims, and this one is a very thought out one :D GG ! Similar age ranges also helps out lol.

Being already in a relationship is a very interesting dynamic too. As a chronic single person, I try to put myself in MC's shoes and...options are there to have very different paths !

Thank you for the game ! Can't wait for Ch. 3 (and further on) :) Happy holiday/vacation and best of work !

My tea is ready.

Literally and figuratively ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Thanks a lot !

Hope you enjoy some holiday time (or take it as rest if not celebrated) at this end of the year. This was a berry Steam(y) gift from our Santa ! 

As a currently sick person (thanks, existing cold air), I'm gonna be chilling a bit trying out the new update.

And I'll see myself out with my puns.

Cheers ! :)

Thanks for the info~

I really do appreciate the hairstyle and outfit changes in this game. It's such a "detail" for some, but definitly a game changer for me as it adds more dynamics and fits better given the context at that time. I am a big fan of all the outfits you designed so far (with a little + for Raif's :3). So, thank you for your sacrifice m(_  _)m

Same thing for the eye colour change. I cannot imagine how pointy it is to get it coded for all the changes every time.

Overall, this is such a fun concept. I went feral after discovering Gilded Shadows (which I replay sometimes to get my dose of Yuu) and I haven't had a story-based game pull me so into that I feel like I'm reading my sci-fi back in highschool (which is like, 10 years ago + at this point). It just tickles some little bone of mine, and makes me giddy. All thanks to your thoughtfullness and writing style :)

The game is still ongoing of course, but I will definitly keep following your works from now on (and hopefully when I get a stable job next year, your Patreon).

That said, I saw 1-2 little discrepancies in chapter 8 and 9 (e.g. reading dialogue and then I am called as ['Name'] for example). But from your Bug post, you have a team for that so no need to report this (if I understoof correctly).

Cheers !

Thank you a lot ! :)

Enjoy some rest~